Re: [Gen-art] [bmwg] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bmwg-evpntest-07
Sarah Banks <sbanks@encrypted.net> Tue, 25 May 2021 16:22 UTC
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From: Sarah Banks <sbanks@encrypted.net>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [bmwg] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bmwg-evpntest-07
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Hi Ines,
Thank you for your review. The authors are reviewing the feedback and plan to update shortly.
Thank you,
Sarah (Doc Shepherd)
> On May 24, 2021, at 9:24 AM, Ines Robles via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Ines Robles
> Review result: Ready
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-evpntest-07
> Reviewer: Ines Robles
> Review Date: 2021-05-24
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-24
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary:
>
> This document defines methodologies for benchmarking Ethernet VPN (EVPN) and
> Provider Backbone Bridging EVPN (PBB-EVPN) performance. This document is
> Informational. No major issues found.
>
> Major issues: None
>
> Minor issues: None
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
> - Check punctuation, some sentences do not start with space after period. e.g.
> page 16 "... sample.The time ..." - Some paragraphs do not start with
> upper-case letter. e.g. page 10, "confirm the DUT..." - I would expand PBB-EVPN
> the first time used. Perhaps in the introduction, "Provider Backbone Bridging
> EVPN (PBB-EVPN) is defined in RFC 7623, discussing how can be combined with
> EVPNs to provide a new/combined solution...."
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> Thank you for this document,
>
> Ines
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- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-b… Ines Robles via Datatracker
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