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<Pasi.Eronen@nokia.com> Tue, 03 April 2007 08:58 UTC

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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-aii-aggregate-02
Reviewer: Pasi Eronen
Review Date: 03 April 2007
IESG Telechat date: 05 April 2007

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that should be fixed before publication.

Comments:

I reviewed this document already during IETF last call; my 
comments (mostly of editorial nature) can be found here:

http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/reviews/draft-ietf-pwe3-aii-aggregate-
02-eronen.txt

The document shepherd replied that these comments could be
addressed by RFC editor notes, and I agree.

Best regards,
Pasi


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