[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-mahesh-etsi-urn-01

Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com> Thu, 07 June 2018 10:58 UTC

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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-mahesh-etsi-urn-01
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2018-06-07
IETF LC End Date: None
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: A simple text ready for publication. A few minor spelling mistakes.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: My spell checker picked up the following:

========
   Communication Technologies including fixed, mobile, radio, broadcast,
   internet, aeornautical and other areas.

SB> s/aeornautical/aeronautical/
========

      +---------+--------------------------------------------------+
      | ETSI    | European Telecommunications Standards Instititue |
SB> s/Instititue/Institute/ 
========

         Name: European Telecommuncations Standards Institute (ETSI)
SB>s/Telecommuncations/Telecommunications/ 
========