Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pcn-cl-edge-behaviour-11.txt
Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Mon, 02 January 2012 19:02 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pcn-cl-edge-behaviour-11.txt
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On 2012-01-03 03:17, Tom Taylor wrote:
> Thanks for the review, Brian.
>
> On the 'incomplete state machine' issue: I'll think about additional
> text to make sure things keep on moving along.
Thanks!
>
> On the matter of PRI, etc.: I was working straight from the Syslog RFC,
> RFC 5424. I can add text to make it clear I am referring to terminology
> (field names) defined in that RFC.
Yes, a well-placed reference would probably be sufficient. I sort of
guessed it was Syslog terminology, but it wasn't completely clear.
Brian
>
> Tom Taylor
>
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pcn-cl-… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pcn… Tom Taylor
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pcn… Brian E Carpenter