[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-experiments-03.txt
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Sat, 09 September 2006 18:37 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-experiments-03.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: Ready Minor points (they should be fixed by the RFC Editor): - in 1 page 3: a missing closing parenthesis. I suggest to add the number of the RFCs too. - is "validatable" (in 4 page 7 and 6 page 9) a correct English word? - in 10.2 page 13 reference [6] is obsolete: a new version 03 was submitted in June. Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
- [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-expe… Francis Dupont
- [Gen-art] Re: review of draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-… David Blacka