Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis-06

Randy Bush <randy@psg.com> Thu, 16 June 2022 13:37 UTC

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>> Nits fulls up three errors:
>> 
>>  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 2385 (Obsoleted by RFC 5925)
>>  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 5246 (Obsoleted by RFC 8446)
>>  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 8208 (Obsoleted by RFC 8608)

the first remains, with explanation

the last two were updated a version or so back

randy