Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-lear-iana-timezone-database-03
Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com> Tue, 26 April 2011 15:30 UTC
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Date: Tue, 26 Apr 2011 17:30:03 +0200
From: Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com>
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Cc: draft-lear-iana-timezone-database.all@tools.ietf.org, General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>, ietf@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-lear-iana-timezone-database-03
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Hi Elwyn, Thank you again for the review. Please see below. > Summary: > Almost ready for the IESG. This is my second review of the document. > > I suggested in the previous review that it might make life easier, particularly > if an appeal was ever entered, if the document didn't use the RFC 5226 Designated > Expert mechanism but defined the role separately. This hasn't happened but the > distinction is now clearer. To make it quite clear I would be inclined to add > 'except as regards appeals against decisions of the Designated Expert > (see Section 5)' after [RFC5226] in the definition of TZ Coordinator in Section 2. I've adopted your above suggested wording. > Otherwise there are a couple of editorial nits. > > . > Nits/Editorial: > s3: s/policy policy/policy/ (repeated word) Corrected. > s8, first para: s/filling/filling the role/ (maybe 'post') This text changed based on another review. > s8, last para: s/TZ Coordinators/TZ Coordinator/ Corrected. > s10: s/Elwin/Elwyn/ (thanks for the ack!) Corrected and apologies! I hate when that happens to me! Eliot
- [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-lear-iana-timez… Elwyn Davies
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-lear-iana-t… Eliot Lear