[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-pce-inter-layer-frwk-10.txt
Sean Turner <turners@ieca.com> Fri, 12 June 2009 13:25 UTC
Return-Path: <turners@ieca.com>
X-Original-To: gen-art@core3.amsl.com
Delivered-To: gen-art@core3.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by core3.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7944C3A6A16 for <gen-art@core3.amsl.com>; Fri, 12 Jun 2009 06:25:38 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.416
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.416 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-2.599, SARE_OBFU_SPLIT_HR2=0.183]
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([64.170.98.32]) by localhost (core3.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 1txD1dHeQ76J for <gen-art@core3.amsl.com>; Fri, 12 Jun 2009 06:25:37 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from smtp107.biz.mail.re2.yahoo.com (smtp107.biz.mail.re2.yahoo.com [206.190.52.176]) by core3.amsl.com (Postfix) with SMTP id 564743A6918 for <gen-art@ietf.org>; Fri, 12 Jun 2009 06:25:37 -0700 (PDT)
Received: (qmail 69806 invoked from network); 12 Jun 2009 13:25:43 -0000
Received: from unknown (HELO thunderfish.local) (turners@96.231.118.218 with plain) by smtp107.biz.mail.re2.yahoo.com with SMTP; 12 Jun 2009 13:25:42 -0000
X-Yahoo-SMTP: qPTWNAeswBAtDTSn9GKlmmL3C90ke7grn_5n9To-
X-YMail-OSG: Ilh_.m4VM1mn4XZ803CYCCoOVLDhcvgkro7SD0QAZtIlVw9mm2rKBmMg6oduE5YdUUDt4aar0NBjJqRH6AJm74SgFBPVgaCj6HjXbgZuevnA7Qkh28NJX_ImBA4l_DmYfgG85RURy.6GiCEU_EnDbMQzmJGrcTm_Y5y1NcCZoBgkt3_P90NDIZhgKLtMW.F0nETN6NIpsx9ETjXzFEZ164jL82h7Xl2u_9Q05zvTEXu.YOmSD3wFtqWvdZTuclOU7N0BsC7095aT0pqNBm4TBsN07PjImLZTzajfWOlsOqrWLRNHYWH0O_cV6HyQFUrnvoH3ijonKuZPQAXmAhzwqvjps0FOxOoU9RybXohIDELU
X-Yahoo-Newman-Property: ymail-3
Message-ID: <4A325757.7050903@ieca.com>
Date: Fri, 12 Jun 2009 09:25:43 -0400
From: Sean Turner <turners@ieca.com>
User-Agent: Thunderbird 2.0.0.21 (Macintosh/20090302)
MIME-Version: 1.0
To: pce-chairs@tools.ietf.org, pce-ads@tools.ietf.org, General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="ISO-8859-1"; format="flowed"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Cc: jvasseur@cisco.com
Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-pce-inter-layer-frwk-10.txt
X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.9
Precedence: list
List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" <gen-art.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art>
List-Post: <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 12 Jun 2009 13:25:38 -0000
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pce-inter-layer-frwk-10.txt Reviewer: Sean Turner Review Date: 2009-06-09 IETF LC End Date: 2009-06-16 IESG Telechat date: (not known) Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication (informational with no RFC 2119 requirements terminology), but has nits that should be fixed before publication. I ran it through ID-nits: - is a pre-5378 disclaimer needed? - draft-ietf-pce-brpc has been published as RFC 5441 - draft-ietf-pce-path-key has been published as RFC 5520 In 5.1, there's missing reference: PCEP [ <a href="'>RFC5440]
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-pce-int… Sean Turner
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-pce… Adrian Farrel