[Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review for draft-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-routing-large-dc

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Mon, 13 June 2016 12:49 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-routing-large-dc

Reviewer: Dan Romascanu

Review Date: 6/13

IETF LC End Date: 6/6

IESG Telechat date: 6/16



Summary:

The document is ready. It explains in a clear and detailed manner the operational experience in the design of large data centers using L3 only devices, Clos topology and BGP as routing protocol. I am not a routing expert, so I cannot validate all the statements made in the document, but the explanation seems clear and makes sense. The only comment I had in my IETF LC review was related to the lack of expansion of some of the acronyms (e.g. ASN, FIB ,etc.) - the issue was fixed in the revised version (11).



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