Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05
"Suhas Nandakumar (snandaku)" <snandaku@cisco.com> Thu, 17 March 2016 08:54 UTC
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From: "Suhas Nandakumar (snandaku)" <snandaku@cisco.com>
To: Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net>
Thread-Topic: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05
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Hello Jari The suggested changes were made and reviewed by AD and the chairs Thanks Suhas Sent from my iPhone > On Mar 17, 2016, at 1:35 AM, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> wrote: > > Thanks for the review, Meral!! > > Authors, have you see the suggested editorial changes? Wanted to make sure they are not missed. > > Jari > >> On 22 Feb 2016, at 20:19, Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> wrote: >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05 >> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour >> Review Date: 2016-02-22 >> IETF LC End Date: 2016-02-26 >> IESG Telechat date: NA >> >> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments. >> >> Major issues: >> >> Minor issues: >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> -[Page 2,3], please spell out RTP, SDP, AVPF at first use. >> -[Page 2] "simulation data" is listed as real time along with audio, video. I suggest removing it and putting "time critical application" if that is what we want to convey. >> -[Page 5], Section 5, "in the Section 3"---->"in Section 3" >> >> Best regards, >> Meral >> --- >> Meral Shirazipour >> Ericsson >> Research >> www.ericsson.com >> _______________________________________________ >> Gen-art mailing list >> Gen-art@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-… Meral Shirazipour
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Suhas Nandakumar (snandaku)
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Jari Arkko