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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 17 March 2016 09:20 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05
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Thanks, all fine then!

Jari

On 17 Mar 2016, at 08:54, Suhas Nandakumar (snandaku) <snandaku@cisco.com> wrote:

> Hello Jari
> 
>   The suggested changes were made and reviewed by AD and the chairs
> 
> Thanks
> Suhas
> 
> Sent from my iPhone
> 
>> On Mar 17, 2016, at 1:35 AM, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> wrote:
>> 
>> Thanks for the review, Meral!!
>> 
>> Authors, have you see the suggested editorial changes? Wanted to make sure they are not missed.
>> 
>> Jari
>> 
>>> On 22 Feb 2016, at 20:19, Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> wrote:
>>> 
>>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
>>> 
>>> For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>>> 
>>> Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05
>>> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
>>> Review Date: 2016-02-22
>>> IETF LC End Date: 2016-02-26
>>> IESG Telechat date: NA
>>> 
>>> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments.
>>> 
>>> Major issues:
>>> 
>>> Minor issues:
>>> 
>>> Nits/editorial comments:
>>> -[Page 2,3], please spell out RTP, SDP, AVPF at first use.
>>> -[Page 2] "simulation data" is listed as real time along with audio, video. I suggest removing it and putting "time critical application" if that is what we want to convey.
>>> -[Page 5], Section 5, "in the Section 3"---->"in Section 3"
>>> 
>>> Best regards,
>>> Meral
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>>> Ericsson
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