Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review fordraft-ietf-ipsecme-esp-null-heuristics-05.txt

"Spencer Dawkins" <spencer@wonderhamster.org> Tue, 16 February 2010 06:48 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review fordraft-ietf-ipsecme-esp-null-heuristics-05.txt
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(snort) And now, for the high-order bit :D


>I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for
> this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
>
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
> may receive.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-esp-null-heuristics-05.txt
> Reviewer: Spencer Dawkins
> Review Date: 2010-02-15 (sorry!)
> IETF LC End Date: 2010-02-10
> IESG Telechat date: (not known)
> Summary:

This document is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC. I do 
have a small number of minor questions, provided in my review, but none are 
show-stoppers. I also have noted a small number of nits and suggestions for 
improved clarity, which are not part of the Gen-ART review, but are offered 
to the document editor for possible inclusion.