[Gen-art] Gen Art review of draft-solinas-suiteb-cert-profile-04
Avshalom Houri <AVSHALOM@il.ibm.com> Tue, 14 July 2009 18:38 UTC
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-solinas-suiteb-cert-profile-04 Reviewer: Avshalom Houri Review Date: 2009-07-14 IETF LC End Date: - IESG Telechat date: 2009-07-16 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC. The document is a reasonable contribution to the area of Internet engineering which it covers. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Line 106: the text notes the requirement is Probably should be: the text that notes the requirement is Thanks --Avshalom
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