Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-campbell-art-rfc5727-update-02

"Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@bell-labs.com> Mon, 29 February 2016 14:45 UTC

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From: "Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@bell-labs.com>
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Ben Campbell wrote:
> (+ART ADs)
>
> On 26 Feb 2016, at 14:43, Vijay K. Gurbani wrote:
>
>> Minor: - S1, "Other RAI working groups develop extensions to SIP
>> that do not change the core protocol, new applications of SIP, and
>> other technologies for interactive communication among humans."
>>
>> Are we intentionally limiting interactive communications only to
>> "humans"?  I would suspect that this would be limiting, no?  A
>> bunch of SIP SUBS/NOTs happen between automaton, or machines.
>> Surely we don't want to exclude these in the future.  My
>> suggestion would be to simply take out the phrase "among humans"
>
> Hi Vijay,

Ben: Thank you for considering my comments.  Inline, please.

> Actually, the "human" part was intentional. RFC5727 was primarily
> about technologies for human communication. Certainly some of those
> technologies may be dual use (e.g. XMPP, SIP-Events), but the reason
> they were historically in the RAI area is that the primary use cases
> under consideration involved humans, or supported those that did.

I suspect that your view as an AD may be more nuanced than mine, but I
must admit that I am not entirely comfortable with limiting ART to
"human communications", as would be implied by the text as currently
written.

Certainly nothing in rfc3261 explicitly limits communications to humans.

> Those boundaries are more blurred now since the merger of APP and RAI
> into ART. But 5727 was primarily about the SIP change process. That
> text in section 1 is intended to describe the scope of 5727, and in
> section 3 to describe the subset of ART wgs that historically would
> have been considered RAI.
>
> (I do note the use of RAI that probably needs to be fixed, or at
> least put into past tense.)

I believe that dropping the phrase "among humans" from the paragraph
does not impact any aspect that at least I can observe, and may indeed
have the benefit that no one in the future will claim that SIP cannot
be used for m2m communications because of the limiting phrase.

Cheers,

- vijay
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