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Re: [Gen-art] [GenArt] Review of draft-ietf-stone-mgcp-vbd-07

Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Fri, 16 July 2010 10:25 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [GenArt] Review of draft-ietf-stone-mgcp-vbd-07
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Hi Wassim,

thanks for your review. The authors will submit a revise I-D addressing
your comments as soon as they are back from vacation.

Cheers,

Gonzalo

On 08/07/2010 9:28 PM, Wassim Haddad wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, 
> please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you 
> may receive.
> 
> Document: draft-stone-mgcp-vbd-07
> Reviewer: Wassim Haddad
> Review Date: 2010-07-08
> IETF LC End Date: 2010-07-09
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
> 
> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as informational RFC.
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> - Section 8: 
> 
> suggestion: "In this section, we provide two call flows examples".
> 
> - Page 37: step 7:
> 
> s/turns/turn (and add ",")
> 
> 
> Regards,
> 
> Wassim H.
> 
> 
> 
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>

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