[Gen-art] [GenArt] Review of draft-ietf-stone-mgcp-vbd-07
Wassim Haddad <wassim.haddad@ericsson.com> Thu, 08 July 2010 18:28 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-stone-mgcp-vbd-07 Reviewer: Wassim Haddad Review Date: 2010-07-08 IETF LC End Date: 2010-07-09 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: This draft is ready to be published as informational RFC. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Section 8: suggestion: "In this section, we provide two call flows examples". - Page 37: step 7: s/turns/turn (and add ",") Regards, Wassim H.
- [Gen-art] [GenArt] Review of draft-ietf-stone-mgc… Wassim Haddad
- Re: [Gen-art] [GenArt] Review of draft-ietf-stone… Gonzalo Camarillo