[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-michaelson-4byte-as-representation-01.txt
Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Fri, 13 October 2006 12:57 UTC
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Cc: Bill Fenner <fenner@research.att.com>, gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-michaelson-4byte-as-representation-01.txt
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Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Draft: draft-michaelson-4byte-as-representation-01.txt Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Review Date: 13 October 2006 IETF LC Date: 9 October 2006 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: This draft has lines and pages that are too long. Lines should not exceed 72 characters and pages should not exceed 58 lines. Acronyms should be expanded on their first use (e.g., AS, BGCP, RPSL). It would be nice if the sections of the draft (excluding the Abstract) would be numbered. Having an example of the proposed representation in the Discussion Section would be helpful. The draft lacks an IANA Considerations Section. Can an Informational RFC define a canonical representation for this type of identifier? The author's email address should appear in the Author's Address Section; not in a different one. Thanks, Gonzalo _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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