[Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 12 October 2006

["Mary Barnes" <[e-mail]>]

Hi all,

Here's this week's LC assignments: 
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art.html 
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-by-reviewer.html 

I divided the set of 5 hollenbeck-epp docs amongst 5 different
reviewers, although they were last called as a set (it didn't seem fair
to dump over 200 pages of documentation on a single person).

For your convenience, the standard template is included at the end of
the assignments.  

Thanks, 
Mary. 

--------------------------- 
Reviewer: David Black

- 'PWE3 ATM Transparent Cell Transport Service '
   <draft-ietf-pwe3-cell-transport-06.txt> as a Proposed Standard

IETF LC ends on 2006-10-23.

The file can be obtained via
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-pwe3-cell-transport-06.tx
t


--------------------------- 
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies

- 'Long-Term Archive Service Requirements '
   <draft-ietf-ltans-reqs-09.txt> as an Informational RFC

IETF LC ends on 2006-10-23.

The file can be obtained via
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ltans-reqs-09.txt


--------------------------- 
Reviewer: Eric Gray

- 'Guidance for AAA Key Management '
   <draft-housley-aaa-key-mgmt-04.txt> as a BCP

IETF LC ends on 2006-11-06.

The file can be obtained via
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-housley-aaa-key-mgmt-04.txt


--------------------------- 
Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo

- 'Canonical representation of 4-byte AS numbers '
   <draft-michaelson-4byte-as-representation-01.txt> as an Informational
RFC

IETF LC ends on 2006-11-06.

The file can be obtained via
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-michaelson-4byte-as-representa
tion-01.txt


--------------------------- 
Reviewer: Harald Alvestrand

- 'Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) '
   <draft-hollenbeck-epp-rfc3730bis-03.txt> as a Draft Standard

IETF LC ends on 2006-11-11.  

Note that the document involves a number of references to documents
at a lower level of standardization :RFC 3023 (XML Media Types)
and RFC 3339 (Date and Time on the Internet: Timestamps).  

The document includes an appendix containing a list of changes from the
relevant RFC.  While there were several text changes to clarify portions
of the text as a result of implementation experience, there were no
schema changes needed when updating the documents.  The EPP version
specified in the original RFCs and the -bis documents remains the same.

The file can be obtained via
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-hollenbeck-epp-rfc3730bis-03.t
xt

Implementation Report can be accessed at:

http://www.ietf.org/IESG/Implementations/RFCs3730-3734_implem.txt


--------------------------- 
Reviewer: Joel Halpern

- 'Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Host Mapping '
   <draft-hollenbeck-epp-rfc3732bis-03.txt> as a Draft Standard

IETF LC ends on 2006-11-11.  

Note that the document involves a reference to a document
at a lower level of standardization:  RFC 3339 (Date and Time on
the Internet: Timestamps).  

The document includes an appendix containing a list of changes from the
relevant RFC.  While there were several text changes to clarify portions
of the text as a result of implementation experience, there were no
schema changes needed when updating the documents.  The EPP version
specified in the original RFCs and the -bis documents remains the same.

The file can be obtained via
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-hollenbeck-epp-rfc3732bis-03.t
xt


Implementation Report can be accessed at:
http://www.ietf.org/IESG/Implementations/RFCs3730-3734_implem.txt


--------------------------- 
Reviewer: John Loughney


- 'Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Transport Over TCP '
   <draft-hollenbeck-epp-rfc3734bis-03.txt> as a Draft Standard

IETF LC ends on 2006-11-11.  

Note that the document involves a reference to a document
at a lower level of standardization: RFC 2246 (The TLS Protocol
Version 1.0).

The document includes an appendix containing a list of changes from the
relevant RFC.  While there were several text changes to clarify portions
of the text as a result of implementation experience, there were no
schema changes needed when updating the documents.  The EPP version
specified in the original RFCs and the -bis documents remains the same.

The file can be obtained via
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-hollenbeck-epp-rfc3734bis-03.t
xt

Implementation Report can be accessed at:

http://www.ietf.org/IESG/Implementations/RFCs3730-3734_implem.txt


--------------------------- 
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia

- 'Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Domain Name Mapping '
   <draft-hollenbeck-epp-rfc3731bis-04.txt> as a Draft Standard

IETF LC ends on 2006-11-11.  

Note that the document involves a reference to a document
at a lower level of standardization:  RFC 3339 (Date and Time on
the Internet: Timestamps).  

The document includes an appendix containing a list of changes from the
relevant RFC.  While there were several text changes to clarify portions
of the text as a result of implementation experience, there were no
schema changes needed when updating the documents.  The EPP version
specified in the original RFCs and the -bis documents remains the same.

The file can be obtained via
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-hollenbeck-epp-rfc3731bis-04.t
xt

Implementation Report can be accessed at:

http://www.ietf.org/IESG/Implementations/RFCs3730-3734_implem.txt


--------------------------- 
Reviewer: Pasi Eronen

- 'Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Contact Mapping '
   <draft-hollenbeck-epp-rfc3733bis-04.txt> as a Draft Standard

IETF LC ends on 2006-11-11.  

Note that the document involves references to documents
at a lower level of standardization: RFC 2822 (Internet Message
Format) and RFC 3339 (Date and Time on the Internet: Timestamps)

Each document includes an appendix containing a list of changes from the
relevant RFC.  While there were several text changes to clarify portions
of the text as a result of implementation experience, there were no
schema changes needed when updating the documents.  The EPP version
specified in the original RFCs and the -bis documents remains the same.

The file can be obtained via
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-hollenbeck-epp-rfc3733bis-04.t
xt

Implementation Report can be accessed at:

http://www.ietf.org/IESG/Implementations/RFCs3730-3734_implem.txt


--------------------------- 
Reviewer: Robert Sparks

- 'Fragmentation Considered Very Harmful '
   <draft-heffner-frag-harmful-02.txt> as an Informational RFC

IETF LC ends on 2006-11-17.

The file can be obtained via
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-heffner-frag-harmful-02.txt


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