Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ppsp-problem-statement-07.txt

Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Mon, 28 November 2011 16:08 UTC

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Oops, I missed to include two spelling errors: requsted (4 page 11)
and Procotol (in figures, multiple occurrences).
   
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Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr