[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-fwk-04
Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> Thu, 23 August 2012 21:35 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-fwk-04
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-fwk-04 Reviewer: Martin Thomson Review Date: 2012-09-23 IETF LC End Date: 2012-08-24 IESG Telechat date: - Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Nits: I think that you probably meant to have the second letter of "Antonymous System" rotated 180 degrees. This appears several times.
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pce-hierar… Martin Thomson
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pce-hi… Adrian Farrel