Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-fwk-04
"Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Sat, 25 August 2012 09:27 UTC
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From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
To: 'Martin Thomson' <martin.thomson@gmail.com>, draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-fwk.all@tools.ietf.org, gen-art@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-fwk-04
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Got it, thauks. Adriau > -----Original Message----- > From: Martin Thomson [mailto:martin.thomson@gmail.com] > Sent: 23 August 2012 22:35 > To: draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-fwk.all@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org > Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-fwk-04 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-fwk-04 > Reviewer: Martin Thomson > Review Date: 2012-09-23 > IETF LC End Date: 2012-08-24 > IESG Telechat date: - > > Summary: > This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. > > Nits: > I think that you probably meant to have the second letter of > "Antonymous System" rotated 180 degrees. This appears several times.
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pce-hierar… Martin Thomson
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pce-hi… Adrian Farrel