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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pim-rfc8736bis-01

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Thu, 25 May 2023 07:21 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Date: Thu, 25 May 2023 10:20:51 +0300
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Mallory, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On May 16, 2023, at 15:49, Mallory Knodel via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> For more information, please see the FAQ at
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> Document: draft-ietf-pim-rfc8736bis-??
> Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
> Review Date: 2023-05-16
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-11
> IESG Telechat date: 2023-05-25
> 
> Summary: This document obsoletes another and is nearly identical in text and
> format, except for the critical text that has been updated. Therefore I think
> very few changes can or even should be made other than the incisive changes
> proposed by the authors. Only two small editorial suggestions: one is a
> stylistic choice and up to the discretion of the authors and the second is a
> typographical error.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> * It's unclear why message type names appear in parenthesis, rather than
> simply without, in sub-sections 4.x. * In IANA Considerations, "non- default"
> should be "non-default".
> 
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