Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-iid-registry-update-00

"Alvaro Retana (aretana)" <aretana@cisco.com> Tue, 16 April 2013 21:06 UTC

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From: "Alvaro Retana (aretana)" <aretana@cisco.com>
To: "stewart@g3ysx.org.uk" <stewart@g3ysx.org.uk>, "Stewart Bryant (stbryant)" <stbryant@cisco.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-iid-registry-update-00
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On 4/16/13 8:04 AM, "Stewart Bryant" <stewart@g3ysx.org.uk> wrote:

>We are still short of this text.
>
>I can add it as an editors note. Just give me a few lines
>and I will put it on the telechat.

Stewart:

Here's the text to add to the last paragraph in section 1:

For example, [I-D.ietf-ospf-ipv4-embedded-ipv6-routing] describes an
application in which IPv4-embedded IPv6 addresses are used to transport
IPv4 packets over an IPv6 network.  While the IPv4-embedded IPv6 addresses
do in fact represent IPv6 destinations, it would be operationally
beneficial to be able to easily identify the specific application by
having a separate space to do so.



Besides the text, we need to add the informational reference, and include
Ben in the acks.  Let me know if you rather I publish an update (tonight).

Thanks!

Alvaro.