[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-stun-06.txt
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Sun, 17 May 2015 13:09 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-stun-06.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150515 IETF LC End Date: 20150513 IESG Telechat date: 20150514?? Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: I reviewed the 06 version. - 1 page 3: signalling -> signaling - 4.1 page 5: after the terminology section it is recommended to avoid lower case keywords (e.g., the may in "A B2BUA may be in"). - 4.4 page 11: a may and a should... - authors' addresses pages 13 and 14: India is the full country name, US the ISO IS 3166 code (the full name is USA). The current rule is to use 3166 two letter codes, I raised a concern as the UPU has the opposite rule (full names). Let the RFC Editor to handle this? Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
- [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-stun-0… Francis Dupont
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