Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology-05

Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 28 April 2023 14:57 UTC

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From: Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology-05
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Hi Gyan, 

Thanks for the review.

Acee

> On Apr 27, 2023, at 6:00 PM, Gyan Mishra via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Gyan Mishra
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology-??
> Reviewer: Gyan Mishra
> Review Date: 2023-04-27
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-03
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> This draft updates terminology for OSPF specifications.
> 
> Major issues:
> None
> 
> Minor issues:
> None 
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> None
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>