[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01

Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 11 January 2022 18:48 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01

Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2022-01-11
IETF LC End Date: 2022-01-19
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 0

Nits/editorial comments: 1

In Section 3, last paragraph: s/If a server which advertises/If a server that advertises/
(Reason: Restrictive clauses should use "that" [1]).
[1] https://www.dictionary.com/e/that-vs-which/

Thanks,

- vijay

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-h… Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Ryan Hamilton
Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review… Lars Eggert