[Gen-art] Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ippm-bw-capacity-05

Lars Eggert <lars.eggert@nokia.com> Tue, 09 October 2007 15:25 UTC

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On 2007-10-9, at 1:35, ext Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> Even if IPPM is expanded at the top of the document as the working  
> group
> this document comes from, the acronym could also be expanded on its
> first use in the actual body of the document.

We'll do that with an RFC Editor Note, assuming the authors agree.

Thanks for the review!

Lars
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