Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-jones-cose-rsa-03
Roni Even <roni.even@huawei.com> Mon, 19 June 2017 05:01 UTC
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From: Roni Even <roni.even@huawei.com>
To: Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com>, Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-jones-cose-rsa-03
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Mike, Thanks, look OK to me now Roni From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Mike Jones Sent: יום ו 16 יוני 2017 05:16 To: Roni Even; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-jones-cose-rsa.all@ietf.org; Kathleen Moriarty; ietf@ietf.org; Eric Rescorla Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-jones-cose-rsa-03 https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-jones-cose-rsa-04 addresses your review comments, Roni. Thanks for the useful review! -- Mike P.S. I also thanked you in the publication announcement at http://self-issued.info/?p=1697 and as @selfissued<https://twitter.com/selfissued>. -----Original Message----- From: Roni Even [mailto:ron.even.tlv@gmail.com] Sent: Sunday, May 21, 2017 9:05 PM To: gen-art@ietf.org<mailto:gen-art@ietf.org> Cc: draft-jones-cose-rsa.all@ietf.org<mailto:draft-jones-cose-rsa.all@ietf.org>; ietf@ietf.org<mailto:ietf@ietf.org> Subject: Genart telechat review of draft-jones-cose-rsa-03 Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-jones-cose-rsa-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2017-05-21 IETF LC End Date: 2017-06-15 IESG Telechat date: 2017-06-22 Summary: The document is ready for publication as standard track RFC with nits Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. Section 3 first paragraph "can be find" should be "can be found" 2. IANA 5.1 table 1 and 2 missing recommended colum 3. IANA 5.3 table 4 the title is not "value" but "label"