Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-jones-cose-rsa-03

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Tue, 20 June 2017 18:44 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Cc: Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com>, Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>, "draft-jones-cose-rsa.all@ietf.org" <draft-jones-cose-rsa.all@ietf.org>, Kathleen Moriarty <kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com>, Eric Rescorla <ekr@rtfm.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-jones-cose-rsa-03
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Roni, thanks for your review. Mike, thanks for making the edits. I entered a No Objection ballot position.

Alissa

> On Jun 19, 2017, at 1:01 AM, Roni Even <roni.even@huawei.com> wrote:
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> Mike,
> Thanks, look OK to me now
> Roni
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> From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-bounces@ietf.org <mailto:gen-art-bounces@ietf.org>] On Behalf Of Mike Jones
> Sent: יום ו 16 יוני 2017 05:16
> To: Roni Even; gen-art@ietf.org <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>
> Cc: draft-jones-cose-rsa.all@ietf.org <mailto:draft-jones-cose-rsa.all@ietf.org>; Kathleen Moriarty; ietf@ietf.org <mailto:ietf@ietf.org>; Eric Rescorla
> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-jones-cose-rsa-03
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> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-jones-cose-rsa-04 <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-jones-cose-rsa-04> addresses your review comments, Roni.  Thanks for the useful review!
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>                                                                 -- Mike
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> P.S.  I also thanked you in the publication announcement at http://self-issued.info/?p=1697 <http://self-issued.info/?p=1697> and as @selfissued <https://twitter.com/selfissued>.
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Roni Even [mailto:ron.even.tlv@gmail.com <mailto:ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>] 
> Sent: Sunday, May 21, 2017 9:05 PM
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> Subject: Genart telechat review of draft-jones-cose-rsa-03
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> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> Document: draft-jones-cose-rsa-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2017-05-21
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-06-15
> IESG Telechat date: 2017-06-22
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> Summary: The document is ready for publication as standard track RFC with nits
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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments: 
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> 1. Section 3 first paragraph "can be find" should be "can be found"
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> 2. IANA 5.1  table 1 and 2 missing recommended colum
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> 3. IANA 5.3 table 4 the title is not "value" but "label"
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