[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06
Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Tue, 08 October 2013 20:40 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06 Reviewer: Ben Campbell Review Date: 2013-10-08 IESG Telechat date: 2013-10-10 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC. This version addresses all the comments from my last call review of version 04. I do have a couple of new (or I missed the first time) editorial comments that might be worth addressing if there is a new version prior to approval. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: -- General: idnits 2.12.18 reports some missing references--please check. -- Abstract and Intro Please expand UA and XCON on first mention (Both in Abstract and in Section 1).
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-yusef-… Ben Campbell
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-yu… Mary Barnes
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-yu… Jari Arkko