Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06

Ben: thank you very much for the review. Mary: thank you for addressing the comments. I have balloted a No-Obj for this draft.

Jari

On Oct 9, 2013, at 1:10 PM, Mary Barnes <mary.ietf.barnes@gmail.com> wrote:

> Thanks Ben.  We'll fix these nits in the next version.
> 
> Mary.
> 
> 
> On Tue, Oct 8, 2013 at 3:39 PM, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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> 
> Document: draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06
> Reviewer: Ben Campbell
> Review Date: 2013-10-08
> IESG Telechat date: 2013-10-10
> 
> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC. This version addresses all the comments from my last call review of version 04. I do have a couple of new (or I missed the first time) editorial comments that might be worth addressing if there is a new version prior to approval.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> None
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> -- General:
> 
> idnits 2.12.18 reports some missing references--please check.
> 
> -- Abstract and Intro
> 
> Please expand UA and XCON on first mention (Both in Abstract and in Section 1).
> 
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