[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-sip-uri-list-subscribe-02
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-sip-uri-list-subscribe-02 Reviewer: Pasi Eronen Review Date: 2007-12-10 IETF LC End Date: 2007-12-10 IESG Telechat date: (not known yet) Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. Comments: I'm not a SIP expert, but this looks ok to me. One nit: the example in Section 7 should be checked by SIP experts. It looks like there's an extra space on the first line, but there might be other things I didn't notice. Best regards, Pasi _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art