Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide-05

Jonathan Rosenberg <jdrosen@cisco.com> Wed, 22 October 2008 16:55 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide-05
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Yes, its fine.

-Jonathan R.

DRAGE, Keith (Keith) wrote:
> As WG chair I can say that the the proposed text reflects the intent of the WG.
> 
>> "This document is a snapshot of the SIP related 
>> specifications at the time of publication. Updated versions 
>> of this document will be published periodically to capture 
>> the then current set of specifications."
> 
> Jonathan, as editor are you OK with this?
> 
> Keith
> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Suresh Krishnan [mailto:suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com] 
>> Sent: Wednesday, October 22, 2008 3:20 PM
>> To: General Area Review Team; 
>> draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide@tools.ietf.org
>> Cc: sip-chairs@tools.ietf.org; sip-ads@tools.ietf.org
>> Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide-05
>>
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
>> draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide-05.txt
>>
>> For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at 
>> <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>.
>>
>> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call 
>> comments you may receive.
>>
>> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Informational 
>> RFC but I have a comment.
>>
>> Comment
>> =======
>>
>> This document is well written and well categorized. I do have 
>> a nagging feeling that this document will be outdated by the 
>> time it will be published. It is possible to include some 
>> text that says something like
>>
>> "This document is a snapshot of the SIP related 
>> specifications at the time of publication. Updated versions 
>> of this document will be published periodically to capture 
>> the then current set of specifications."
>>
>> or something similar.
>>
>> Cheers
>> Suresh
>>
>>
>>
> 

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