Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide-05

"DRAGE, Keith \(Keith\)" <drage@alcatel-lucent.com> Wed, 22 October 2008 16:16 UTC

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From: "DRAGE, Keith (Keith)" <drage@alcatel-lucent.com>
To: Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com>, General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide@tools.ietf.org
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As WG chair I can say that the the proposed text reflects the intent of the WG.

> "This document is a snapshot of the SIP related 
> specifications at the time of publication. Updated versions 
> of this document will be published periodically to capture 
> the then current set of specifications."

Jonathan, as editor are you OK with this?

Keith

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Suresh Krishnan [mailto:suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com] 
> Sent: Wednesday, October 22, 2008 3:20 PM
> To: General Area Review Team; 
> draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide@tools.ietf.org
> Cc: sip-chairs@tools.ietf.org; sip-ads@tools.ietf.org
> Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide-05
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
> draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide-05.txt
> 
> For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at 
> <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call 
> comments you may receive.
> 
> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Informational 
> RFC but I have a comment.
> 
> Comment
> =======
> 
> This document is well written and well categorized. I do have 
> a nagging feeling that this document will be outdated by the 
> time it will be published. It is possible to include some 
> text that says something like
> 
> "This document is a snapshot of the SIP related 
> specifications at the time of publication. Updated versions 
> of this document will be published periodically to capture 
> the then current set of specifications."
> 
> or something similar.
> 
> Cheers
> Suresh
> 
> 
> 
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