[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps-07

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Sun, 30 October 2011 14:50 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps-07
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Document: draft-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps-07

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date: 2011-10-30

IETF LC End Date: 2011-11-4

IESG Telechat date: 


Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an informational RFC.


Major issues:


I do not have any editorial issues but I am not sure about the value of the
document. I saw the IESG evaluation record
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps/ballot/  and
did not see any value with repeating the comments. So if the discuss are
resolved the draft can be published. This is the reason that I summarized it
as almost ready for publication.


Minor issues:



Nits/editorial comments: