Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps-07
Sheng Jiang <jiangsheng@huawei.com> Mon, 31 October 2011 00:36 UTC
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Roni, Thanks for the reviewing. The document has been largely rewritten after the IESG evaluation. We believe we have resolved the discusses. Best regards, Sheng From: Roni Even [mailto:ron.even.tlv@gmail.com] Sent: Sunday, October 30, 2011 10:48 PM To: draft-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps.all@tools.ietf.org Cc: 'IETF-Discussion list'; gen-art@ietf.org Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps-07 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps-07 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-10-30 IETF LC End Date: 2011-11-4 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major issues: I do not have any editorial issues but I am not sure about the value of the document. I saw the IESG evaluation record https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps/ballot/ and did not see any value with repeating the comments. So if the discuss are resolved the draft can be published. This is the reason that I summarized it as almost ready for publication. Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: