[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-sipping-nat-scenarios-15
Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Mon, 21 March 2011 22:52 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-sipping-nat-scenarios-15
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-sipping-nat-scenarios-15 For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC but it has an issue that probably needs to be fixed before publication. Minor ===== * The draft uses addresses from the RFC1918 space in the examples instead of using the addresses reserved for documentation in RFC 5735 (i.e. 192.0.2.0/24, 198.51.100.0/24, and 203.0.113.0/24). It would be good if this can be fixed in the draft. Thanks Suresh
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-… Suresh Krishnan
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Robert Sparks
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Suresh Krishnan