Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-01

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Mon, 06 April 2020 16:50 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Date: Mon, 6 Apr 2020 12:50:30 -0400
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-01
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Robert, thanks for your review. All, thanks for your responses and text updates. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Mar 13, 2020, at 11:16 AM, Robert Sparks via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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> Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-01
> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review Date: 2020-03-13
> IETF LC End Date: 2020-03-18
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC
> 
> Very minor nit - feel free to ignore -
> 
> This sentence slowed me down when reading:
> 
>   As the origin AS may be modified by outbound policy, policy semantics
>   based on RPKI Origin Validation state MUST be able to be applied
>   separately on distribution into BGP and on egress.
> 
> I suggest something like:
> 
>  As the origin AS may be modified by outbound policy, a BGP speaker 
>  MUST be able to apply policy semantics based on RPKI Origin Validation 
>  state separately on distribution into BGP and on egress.
> 
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