[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-01

[Robert Sparks via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-01
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2020-03-13
IETF LC End Date: 2020-03-18
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC

Very minor nit - feel free to ignore -

This sentence slowed me down when reading:

   As the origin AS may be modified by outbound policy, policy semantics
   based on RPKI Origin Validation state MUST be able to be applied
   separately on distribution into BGP and on egress.

I suggest something like:

  As the origin AS may be modified by outbound policy, a BGP speaker 
  MUST be able to apply policy semantics based on RPKI Origin Validation 
  state separately on distribution into BGP and on egress.