Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-simple-chat-13.txt

Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Tue, 21 February 2012 08:36 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-simple-chat-13.txt
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Hi Suresh,

thanks for your review. The authors will take care of these comments in
the next revision of the draft.

Cheers,

Gonzalo

On 20/02/2012 5:02 PM, Suresh Krishnan wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
> draft-ietf-simple-chat-13.txt
> 
> For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but
> I have a few comments.
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> Section 3:
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> REQ-3: It is unclear why this is separate from REQ-2. In my reading,
> REQ-2 already covers REQ-3.
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> Section 6.1
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> This sentence is not clear. Can you clarify/reword.
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> "Having the header of the Message/CPIM wrapper only in the first chunk,
> the MSRP switch MUST track the Message-Id until the last chunk of the
> message has been distributed."
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> Thanks
> Suresh
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