[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-josefsson-kerberos5-starttls-07.txt
"Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com> Mon, 14 December 2009 11:53 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-josefsson-kerberos5-starttls-07.txt
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-josefsson-kerberos5-starttls-07.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia@ericsson.com> Review Date: 14-Dec-2009 IETF LC End Date: 24-Dec-2009 Summary: The document is ready for publication as an informational RFC. It came as a surprise that a protocol that is used to enhance the security ends up saying that protocol does not require clients to verify the server certificate. It sounds strange, but I think it is well justified. Nits/editorial comments: - Expand acronyms at first occurrence. This includes: SRP - Section 5, 6th paragraph: s/a list that map realm names/a list that maps real names ^^^^ BR, Miguel -- Miguel A. Garcia +34-91-339-3608 Ericsson Spain
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