Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-josefsson-kerberos5-starttls-07.txt
Simon Josefsson <simon@josefsson.org> Tue, 15 December 2009 09:10 UTC
Return-Path: <simon@josefsson.org>
X-Original-To: gen-art@core3.amsl.com
Delivered-To: gen-art@core3.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by core3.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0F67D3A69EF for <gen-art@core3.amsl.com>; Tue, 15 Dec 2009 01:10:00 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.656
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.656 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[AWL=-0.057, BAYES_00=-2.599]
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([64.170.98.32]) by localhost (core3.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id fw0r6D-nLeLA for <gen-art@core3.amsl.com>; Tue, 15 Dec 2009 01:09:59 -0800 (PST)
Received: from yxa-v.extundo.com (yxa-v.extundo.com [83.241.177.39]) by core3.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id ECA943A67DD for <gen-art@ietf.org>; Tue, 15 Dec 2009 01:09:57 -0800 (PST)
Received: from mocca.josefsson.org (c80-216-24-211.bredband.comhem.se [80.216.24.211]) (authenticated bits=0) by yxa-v.extundo.com (8.14.3/8.14.3/Debian-5) with ESMTP id nBF99YKD021349 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES128-SHA bits=128 verify=NOT); Tue, 15 Dec 2009 10:09:36 +0100
From: Simon Josefsson <simon@josefsson.org>
To: "Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com>
References: <4B261848.303@ericsson.com>
OpenPGP: id=B565716F; url=http://josefsson.org/key.txt
X-Hashcash: 1:22:091215:miguel.a.garcia@ericsson.com::hR1FbXy/w7icpn+c:0WPm
X-Hashcash: 1:22:091215:gen-art@ietf.org::mxlRS/qh/Ekzjopl:2+E1
X-Hashcash: 1:22:091215:tim.polk@nist.gov::CslysOnfN/2x1+te:9Oho
X-Hashcash: 1:22:091215:jhutz@cmu.edu::7T+3gNhN1P31fpIY:Q2TH
Date: Tue, 15 Dec 2009 10:09:35 +0100
In-Reply-To: <4B261848.303@ericsson.com> (Miguel A. Garcia's message of "Mon, 14 Dec 2009 11:49:44 +0100")
Message-ID: <87pr6ghacw.fsf@mocca.josefsson.org>
User-Agent: Gnus/5.110011 (No Gnus v0.11) Emacs/23.1 (gnu/linux)
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
X-Virus-Scanned: clamav-milter 0.95.3 at yxa-v
X-Virus-Status: Clean
Cc: Tim Polk <tim.polk@nist.gov>, General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>, Jeffrey Hutzelman <jhutz@cmu.edu>
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-josefsson-kerberos5-starttls-07.txt
X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.9
Precedence: list
List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" <gen-art.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art>
List-Post: <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 15 Dec 2009 09:10:00 -0000
"Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com> writes: > Summary: The document is ready for publication as an informational RFC. Thanks for review! > Nits/editorial comments: > > - Expand acronyms at first occurrence. This includes: SRP Fixed, thanks. > - Section 5, 6th paragraph: > > s/a list that map realm names/a list that maps real names > ^^^^ Thanks. Although s/realm/real/ was not correct; the word 'realm' was actually intended. I clarified this into: a list that maps the Kerberos realm to a Let me know if you have any problem with this. /Simon
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-josefsson-kerbe… Miguel A. Garcia
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-josefsson-k… Simon Josefsson