[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-imss-fc-fcs-mib-02.txt
Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Mon, 19 February 2007 16:20 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-imss-fc-fcs-mib-02.txt
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-imss-fc-fcs-mib-02.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: Minor: ====== * Section 1: Introduction I found this sentence strange. Is there any reason to keep it? This memo includes boilerplate which uses only one of the following terms, but is nevertheless required to mention all of the keywords in the following statement: The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT", "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in BCP 14, RFC 2119 [RFC2119]. Editorial: ========== * No expiration date for draft on the first and last pages. According to http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt =========================================== A document expiration date should appear on the first and last page of the Internet-Draft. The expiration date is 185 days following the submission of the document as an Internet-Draft. Use of the phrase "expires in six months" or "expires in 185 days" is not acceptable. * Intended Status of the document is not specified in the draft. (I found it is Proposed Standard using the ID Tracker) _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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