[Gen-art] gen-art review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-ipfrr-spec-base-12.txt
Scott Brim <swb@employees.org> Wed, 07 May 2008 15:11 UTC
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Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-ipfrr-spec-base-12.txt Reviewer: Scott Brim Review Date: 2008-05-07 IETF LC End Date: 2008-05-13 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. Comments: It looks pretty tight to me. I found a few places where I would have said things slightly less ambiguously but it's quite good enough as it is. Scott _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art