Re: [Gen-art] [Gen-Art] LC Review: draft-ietf-tsvwg-emergency-rsvp-07.txt
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Gen-Art] LC Review: draft-ietf-tsvwg-emergency-rsvp-07.txt
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Hi Joel, > >>>> >>>> Minor Comments: >>>> My personal opinion is that using "call" to describe the >>>> sessions being established is probably not the best choice. In >>>> many contexts which will need to reference this document, call >>>> has a much more specific meaning. It is not clear why "session" >>>> is not sufficient. (But I presume that the particular >>>> terminology is the result of significant consideration, and >>>> therefore my personal reaction is not a reason to hold up this >>>> document.) >>> >>> The rationale was that people were often more familiar with the >>> concept of "emergency" being associated to phone calls than to >>> multimedia sessions. So it helped initially to use the term >>> "call". We included a clarification note explaining that "call" >>> actually means "session". >>> "Note: Below, this document references several examples of IP >>> telephony and its use of "calls", which is one form of the term >>> "sessions" (Video over IP and Instant Messaging being other >>> examples >>> that rely on session establishment). For the sake of >>> simplicity, we >>> shall use the widely known term "call" for the remainder of this >>> document. >>> " >>> Now that the document has matured enough, I would be happy to >>> revert to a more generic "session" terminology. let's hear my co- >>> authors on this. > > I'm fine with this. and in going back to the more generic > "session", we may simply want to do a total inversion of text. > where we start with "session" and stay with it through the entire > document, but note in the Intro that a more specific instance of a > session could be in the form of a "call". >>> We have agreement among co-authors, so next version will address your comment and : - use "session" throughout - have a note saying that a "call" is a more specific instance of a session. Thanks Francois _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
- [Gen-art] [Gen-Art] LC Review: draft-ietf-tsvwg-e… Joel M. Halpern
- Re: [Gen-art] [Gen-Art] LC Review: draft-ietf-tsv… Francois Le Faucheur IMAP
- Re: [Gen-art] [Gen-Art] LC Review: draft-ietf-tsv… Francois Le Faucheur IMAP
- Re: [Gen-art] [Gen-Art] LC Review: draft-ietf-tsv… ken carlberg
- Re: [Gen-art] [Gen-Art] LC Review: draft-ietf-tsv… Francois Le Faucheur IMAP
- [Gen-art] LC Review: draft-ietf-tsvwg-emergency-r… Joel M. Halpern