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Date: Wed, 13 Jul 2022 14:11:17 +0200
From: Ben Maddison <benm@workonline.africa>
To: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
Cc: gen-art@ietf.org, draft-ietf-sidrops-rpkimaxlen.all@ietf.org, last-call@ietf.org, sidrops@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-rpkimaxlen-11
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Hi Roni,

On 07/13, Roni Even via Datatracker wrote:
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits

Thanks for the review.

> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> In section 5.2 ROV is not expanded but earlier in the section Route Origin
> Validation with referene to RFC6811 is mentioned . in which case "RPKI-based
> route origin validation" should be "RPKI-based route origin validation (ROV)"

Ack. This has been incorporated into the working document. A new
revision will be shipped once we have received the rest of the reviews.

Cheers,

Ben

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