[Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-mpls-tp-oam-ext-15

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Fri, 16 January 2015 02:24 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-mpls-tp-oam-ext-15.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2015-01-16
IETF LC End Date: 2015-01-08
IESG Telechat date: 2015-01-22

Summary:   Ready
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Comment:
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Thanks for fixing my Last Call comments.

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