[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-dots-architecture-16
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From: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-dots-architecture-16
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dots-architecture-16 Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat Review Date: 2020-01-31 IETF LC End Date: 2019-01-31 IESG Telechat date: 2020-02-04 This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Thank you for fixing the issues I reported in the last call review. Only one nit remains. IdNits reports: == The document seems to lack the recommended RFC 2119 boilerplate, even if it appears to use RFC 2119 keywords -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching beginning. Boilerplate error? (The document does seem to have the reference to RFC 2119 which the ID-Checklist requires). There is one other reported nit (obsolete reference). It is bogus because it is intended.
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-d… Paul Kyzivat
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