Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-mile-iodef-xmlreg-01.txt
Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Mon, 11 June 2012 16:34 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-mile-iodef-xmlreg-01.txt
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On 06/06/2012 06:57 PM, Brian Trammell wrote: > Hi, Suresh, > > Thanks for the comment; yes, this one is a bit hard to parse (even for me, and I tend to write page-length sentences). I've tweaked your suggested text somewhat and applied to the current working copy of the -02 revision. Thanks Brian. I will look over the new text when it is available. Regards Suresh
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-m… Suresh Krishnan
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ie… Brian Trammell
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ie… Suresh Krishnan