[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-dcsc-channel-ext-03.txt

"Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com> Thu, 04 February 2010 08:08 UTC

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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-dcsc-channel-ext-03.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia@ericsson.com>
Review Date: 04-Feb-2010
IETF LC End Date: 05-Feb-2010
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a Standards track RFC.

Nits/editorial comments:

The document is well written and very clear. My only concern lies in 
Section 4.1, last paragraph:

    It should be noted that the assigned value should be reflected in
    IANAGmplsSwitchingTypeTC at
    http://www.iana.org/assignments/ianagmplstc-mib.

So, I don't really know if IANA needs to modify the MIB, or someone needs 
to modify the MIB and uploaded to IANA, or nothing is supposed to happen 
here. I noticed in the I-D tracker that IANA is not planning to take any 
action with respect the MIB, is this the authors' intention?

/Miguel

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Miguel A. Garcia
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